Walk out with me in morning feet,
along the edge of spring,
still steeped in snow, our woollen coats
pulled hard against the wind.
There, gowned and slippered, see she stands,
Nature is summoning the land,
It’s time to shine
It’s time to shine
She holds the sunlight in her hand.
Walk out with me in morning feet,
and catch the swooshing loud,
of Nature smoothing cotton sheets
and plumping pillow clouds.
She lifts the verdant grass to grow
and lusty, showered in the dew,
It’s time to shine
It’s time to shine
will dress our hillside all anew.
Walk out with me in morning feet,
to greet the waking day,
when preparations are complete
and humans on their way.
Our breakfast on the quilted hill
a secret unrevealed until
It’s time to shine
It’s time to shine
She sweeps our breadcrumbs from her sill.
I love this!! Such a lovely morning you have painted for me. What a gift
you are so welcome x
I’m with Audra on this. I really liked it a great deal.
Thank you Duncan, I enjoyed the challenge presented by the form.
Couldn’t comment on the form; I’m a complete tyro at the the poetry thing.
It’s just lovely. Thank you
fabulous! 🙂
Thank you. A wet and misty morning here on the hill today.
Love this – the middle stanza is quite beautiful.
Anna :o]
Thank you Anna 🙂
This is simply gorgeous. Wonderful rhythm, lovely soft consonance, so well composed.
Thank you Johnny, from the top of my hill x
still fabulous! i just read it again and forgot i’d already read it. still love it.
“quilted hill” — outstanding, love it!
Thaaaaank you. The sun is out on the hill once again this morning 🙂 enjoy your day x