Jacob’s Angel

March 31, 2013 at 11:56 am (history, literature, philosophy, Poems, poetry, Stories) (, , , , , , , , , , , , )

In the Mersey is an angel who is twisting to her beat.
Blown far off heaven’s dance floor, all his holy plans awry,
the angel arches, smiles and twisting, feels the sun beneath his feet.
Her jilted history knocked and settling into awful grim defeat,
the river lashes hard on northern shores to stick and stay.
In the Mersey is an angel who is twisting to her beat.
The Mersey’s bitter kiss holds men to anchor in the deep,
she calls them home but falsely with her widow’s waves of grey.
The angel arches, smiles and twisting, feels the sun beneath his feet.
So many ardent loves have lost their head to her entreat,
and lately found, they stiffly swim their honey’s moon away.
In the Mersey is an angel who is twisting to her beat.
As the angel dips his blessed arms, to caress her winter sweet,
she rains her blows and wraps her sturdy thighs about his waist;
the angel arches, smiles and twisting, feels the sun beneath his feet.
And still cursing broken promises, she leans into his weight
as Liver birds look discreetly on, to flit another day.
In the Mersey is an angel who is twisting to her beat;
the angel arches, smiles and twisting, feels the sun beneath his feet.
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5 Comments

  1. john said,

    Good heavens! It is an actual villanelle! You even have the refrains and repeating lines, if i am not mistaken, all in the correct spots. Wow! I am impressed.

    The poem itself is, of course, lovely…brilliant even. I am going to have to think about it a lot more (and probably nag you in an email) to understand it. But it is deliciously complex with levels of meaning and suggestion. I love it! Thank you so much!

  2. julespaige said,

    I tried a villanelle once…not sure where I’ve placed it.
    You make it look so easy.
    Angels need love too.

  3. metonymy4u said,

    awesome. nothing better than a superb work of art, love-ingly crafted! thank you for sharing!

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