On Writing

January 5, 2013 at 9:07 pm (literature, philosophy, Poems, poetry, Stories) (, , , , , , , )

Sweet words chew me

like tooth-clagging sticky toffee

in their luke warm ink shower.

Poetry addicts, they get in the flow,

spilling me out more tastily

than life intended. It is in their interest:

these gourmandising friends are wise advisers,

but their candy grabber misses often,

only occasionally dropping good.

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2 Comments

  1. unfetteredbs said,

    very true and so well put. I love the candy metaphor. Clever

  2. santahatchronicles said,

    Deep yet playful…thank you. Cheers

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