Wishing Well
November 13, 2012 at 9:26 pm (literature, philosophy, Poems, poetry, Stories) (friendship, love, poem, poems, poetry, relationships, rhyme, things we can't ask, wishes, word, words)
Will you pick me for your team?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you listen to to my dreams?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you call if I fall ill?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you help me to be still?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you love my crooked smile?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you want to stay a while?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you stop the closing door?
Will you, will you, will you?
Will you come again for more?
Please?
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Pawan Hira said,
November 13, 2012 at 9:45 pm
I love the sound of “will you” in repetitive mode. It is actually beautiful and sweet, love it. 🙂
Julia Dean-Richards said,
November 13, 2012 at 9:54 pm
Thank you, my friend Pawan. Sometimes we need help to ask out loud! x
Pawan Hira said,
November 13, 2012 at 9:59 pm
Ah! True. 🙂
ruleofstupid said,
November 13, 2012 at 9:47 pm
Look, I only called you here to fix the leaking sink… I’m really not sure what else to say…
Julia Dean-Richards said,
November 13, 2012 at 9:57 pm
chortling 🙂
writersblogq said,
November 14, 2012 at 11:48 am
Hey, i’ve got a leaky tap you can fix if you like.
I liked this, the repetitive Will you?
It made me very sad.
musicmusewales said,
October 5, 2014 at 7:58 pm
love the haiku Julia …
Julia Dean-Richards said,
October 5, 2014 at 9:33 pm
Yay, Raven x