Views from the Motorway – part II

October 16, 2012 at 8:19 am (literature, Poems, poetry, Stories) (, , , , , , , , , , , )

Red Kites slice twilight skies:
waiters serving cloud cup cakes
upon fine forked tails

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3 Comments

  1. reiterzblog said,

    I like this for its sheer simplicity, yet there’s the lovely imagery of the kites as waiters. Made me smile, and sit back a bit and imagine it

  2. cindy knoke said,

    I want a cupcake in the clouds!!!

    • Julia Dean-Richards said,

      and a nice cuppa tea? Welcome to my cave – a nice big fire and lots of corners to explore 🙂

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